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The Writing Show Newsletter - January 2007
The Writing Show Newsletter Information and Inspiration for Writers
January 2007 Volume 2, Number 1

Greetings!

Happy New Year!

Now That's Writing: Edgar Allan Poe Check out this fantastic passage from one of the lesser-known works of American horror writer Edgar Allan Poe. This opening comes from The Unparalleled Adventures of One Hans Pfaal.

BY late accounts from Rotterdam, that city seems to be in a high state of philosophical excitement. Indeed, phenomena have there occurred of a nature so completely unexpected -- so entirely novel -- so utterly at variance with preconceived opinions -- as to leave no doubt on my mind that long ere this all Europe is in an uproar, all physics in a ferment, all reason and astronomy together by the ears.

Talk about a hook. This opening foreshadows while it whips us into a frenzy! Poe employs superlatives ("so completely unexpected," "so entirely novel," "so utterly at variance," "all Europe," "all physics") to excite us; words implying unanswered questions ("unexpected," "novel," "at variance") to impel us to read on; and expressions of frenzy ("late accounts," "high state," "excitement," uproar") to heighten our senses.

Of course, these techniques can be overdone, but in the hands of the master, they work beautifully.

Now that's writing!

--Paula B.

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in this issue
  • This Month's Silly Picture: Writing Show Host Paula B. in the 70s
  • Writing Trick: Cast Your Story
  • How to Write a Press Release, Part 1
  • Fun Facts: Bestselling Books in 2006
  • Writer�s Challenge: Writing Weekend January 20th and 21st
  • Writing Show News
  • Trivia Question: Bestselling Author

  • Writing Trick: Cast Your Story

    Having trouble fleshing out your characters? Try going cinematic and casting your story with familiar people.

    This trick worked for Jeff Rivera when he was writing his urban novel, Forever My Lady. (Check out Jeff�s July 2006 show here.) Jeff was having trouble writing the character of a female kitchen worker in the protagonist�s prison boot camp. But when he lit on the idea of modeling her after someone he knew, he could hear her talk and see her mannerisms, and the character came to life.

    I�m working this way with my untitled political thriller inspired by the TV show �24.� As soon as I came up with my female politician character, the face of actor Joan Allen magically appeared in my head. (I guess I had �The Contender,� a film in which Allen plays a pol, on the brain.) One of my villains, a Russian terrorist, presented himself to me unbidden as the image of Gary Oldman playing the bad guy in �Air Force One.�

    Of course, you don�t want to write a character who�s exactly the same as someone else. But picturing the familiar can give you something to build on. This technique isn�t new. Even the most famous artists learn by copying the masters before developing their own styles.

    The more you can visualize your story, the more compelling your writing will be. So go ahead�give Aunt Bessie, your best friend Joe, or James Gandolfini a screen test and see what happens.


    How to Write a Press Release, Part 1

    Paul J. Krupin at Direct Contact PR offers the best advice on writing a news release I�ve ever seen:

    �Tell me a story, give me a local news angle, and then touch my heart (make me laugh or cry), make my stomach churn (with horror or fear), hit me in my pocketbook, or grab my gonads.�

    Source: Trashproof News Releases: The Surefire Way to Get Publicity by Paul J. Krupin. You can get the free ebook here.

    I don�t know Paul Krupin, but I think he�s a genius. I was having a terrible time coming up with compelling news releases for our reality shows. Once I read his advice and realized that I needed to touch both editors and consumers in a personal way, I was able to write:

    Title: Novelist Pursues Her Dream in the First Podcast-Based Reality Show

    Lead sentence: Jean Tennant wants to be published, and she�s willing to risk public rejection to make that happen.

    Title: Horror Writer Exposes Himself on Podcast-Based Reality Show

    Lead sentence: Ever wondered what goes on inside the mind of a horror writer?

    With the release for Jean�s show, I was trying to evoke every writer�s dream (and fear). With Mark�s release, I was going for voyeurism and a touch of humor.

    How'd I do?

    Part 2 of this mini-article will appear next month.


    Fun Facts: Bestselling Books in 2006

    According to Publishers Weekly on January 8, 2007, �More books found their way onto the 2006 U.S. weekly charts than ever before�495 new titles, compared with the previous record of 452 set in 2005.� However, nearly 70% of them stayed there for four weeks or less, while more than 20% hung around for only one week.

    With almost 200,000 titles published per year in the U.S., it was easier to get onto the charts last year, but harder staying there. And of course, fewer than 1% of books published got anywhere near them.

    Just in case you�re wondering, here are the top sellers:

    • Hardcover fiction: The Da Vinci Code by Dan Brown�21 weeks on the list
    • Mass market fiction: Angels & Demons by Dan Brown�36 weeks on the list
    • Hardcover nonfiction: Marley & Me by John Grogan�50 weeks on the list
    • Trade books: The Kite Runner by Khaled Hosseini�50 weeks on the list.

    The authors with the most books on the charts were:

    • James Patterson
    • Nora Roberts
    • Dan Brown.


    Writer�s Challenge: Writing Weekend January 20th and 21st

    Finding time to write is such a common challenge for writers that Books in Print bulges with titles on the topic.

    That's why we've come up with our Writing Show writing weekends, where it�s all about making the time to actually do it. To participate, all you have to do is spend three hours (not even consecutively!) over the two-day period writing, planning, researching, or brainstorming.

    That�s it! You don�t have to show your work to anyone, although if you'd like to share your progress with us, we'd love to hear about it.

    I'll be working on the aforementioned untitled political thriller, and this time I'm going to stop planning and start writing. I'll let you know how it goes.

    Please join me!

    --Paula B.


    Writing Show News

    Upcoming shows:

    • January 15, 2007: Police Procedure for Crime Novelists, with Undersheriff Tony Spurlock.
    • January 22, 2007: Travel Writing and Publishing, with Harry S. Pariser.
    • January 29, 2007: Of Editing, Book Design, and Children's Books, with freelance editor and book designer Jill Ronsley.

    Coming in February:

    • The fine print of self-publishing contracts, with attorney/author Mark Levine
    • The BlueCat Screenplay Competition, with screenwriter Gordy Hoffman
    • An inside look at a self-publishing company, with writer and entrepreneur Tim Harper.

      Have a question or topic you'd like covered on the show or in the newsletter? Want to write for us or be a guest host? See mistakes in my writing? Let us know.

      --Paula B.


    Trivia Question: Bestselling Author

    Who is the bestselling author of all time?

    Answer next month.


    The 2007 BlueCat Screenwriting Competition
    This just in from screenwriter Gordy Hoffman at the BlueCat Screenplay competition. Gordy will be talking about the contest on an upcoming Writing Show.

    The BlueCat Screenwriting Competition

    Grand Prize:$10,000

    Finalists: $1500 each

    Entry Fee: $45

    Every writer who enters the BlueCat Screenplay Competition receives written script anlaysis.

    In addition, one finalist receives a live, staged reading of their script at BlueCat's annual SCREENPLAY LIVE at the High Falls Film Festival in New York. The writer will receive airfare, hotel accommodations, and a festival pass.

    Loglines and contact information of all finalists will appear on the BlueCat Web site, along with an interview with the winner.

    Top screenplays will be made available to the film industry upon announcement.

    Since 1998, the BlueCat Screenplay Competition's mission of developing the undiscovered screenwriter continues to reach more writers every year, with BlueCat having the largest cash prize for a screenplay contest offering feedback to all writers.

    We are pleased to announce the BlueCat Screenplay Competition is open for entries of feature length scripts for our ninth year.

    Semi-finalists will be announced on July 1st.

    Five finalists will be named on July 15th.

    The winner presented on August 1st.

    Deadline: March 1, 2007

    The BlueCat Screenwriting Competition

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