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Greetings!
Happy New Year!
Now That's Writing: Edgar Allan
Poe
Check out this fantastic passage from one of the
lesser-known works of American horror writer Edgar
Allan Poe. This opening comes from The
Unparalleled Adventures of One Hans Pfaal.
BY late accounts from Rotterdam, that city seems to
be in a high state of philosophical excitement.
Indeed, phenomena have there occurred of a nature so
completely unexpected -- so entirely novel --
so utterly at variance with preconceived opinions --
as to leave no doubt on my mind that long ere this
all Europe is in an uproar, all physics in a
ferment, all reason and astronomy together by the ears.
Talk about a hook. This opening foreshadows while it
whips us into a frenzy! Poe employs superlatives
("so completely unexpected," "so entirely novel,"
"so utterly at variance," "all Europe," "all
physics") to excite us; words implying unanswered
questions ("unexpected," "novel," "at variance") to
impel us to read on; and expressions of frenzy
("late accounts," "high state," "excitement,"
uproar") to heighten our senses.
Of course, these techniques can be overdone, but in
the hands of the master, they work beautifully.
Now that's writing!
--Paula B.
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| Writing Trick: Cast Your Story |
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Having trouble fleshing out your characters? Try
going cinematic and casting your story with familiar
people.
This trick worked for Jeff Rivera when he was
writing his urban novel, Forever My Lady.
(Check out
Jeff�s July 2006 show here.) Jeff was having
trouble writing the character of a female kitchen
worker in the protagonist�s prison boot camp. But
when he lit on the idea of modeling her after
someone he knew, he could hear her talk and see her
mannerisms, and the character came to life.
I�m working this way with my untitled political
thriller inspired by the TV show �24.� As soon as I
came up with my female politician character, the
face of actor Joan Allen magically appeared in my
head. (I guess I had �The Contender,� a film in
which Allen plays a pol, on the brain.) One of my
villains, a Russian terrorist, presented himself to
me unbidden as the image of Gary Oldman playing the
bad guy in �Air Force One.�
Of course, you don�t want to write a character who�s
exactly the same as someone else. But picturing the
familiar can give you something to build on. This
technique isn�t new. Even the most famous artists
learn by copying the masters before developing their
own styles.
The more you can visualize your story, the more
compelling your writing will be. So go ahead�give
Aunt Bessie, your best friend Joe, or James
Gandolfini a screen test and see what happens.
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| How to Write a Press Release, Part 1 |
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Paul J. Krupin at Direct Contact PR offers the best
advice on writing a news release I�ve ever seen:
�Tell me a story, give me a local news angle, and
then touch my heart (make me laugh or cry), make my
stomach churn (with horror or fear), hit me in my
pocketbook, or grab my gonads.�
Source: Trashproof News Releases: The Surefire
Way to Get Publicity by Paul J. Krupin.
You can get the free ebook here.
I don�t know Paul Krupin, but I think he�s a genius.
I was having a terrible time coming up with
compelling news releases for our reality shows. Once
I read his advice and realized that I needed to
touch both editors and consumers in a personal way,
I was able to write:
Title: Novelist Pursues Her Dream in the First
Podcast-Based Reality Show
Lead sentence: Jean Tennant wants to be published,
and she�s willing to risk public rejection to make
that happen.
Title: Horror Writer Exposes Himself on
Podcast-Based Reality Show
Lead sentence: Ever wondered what goes on inside the
mind of a horror writer?
With the release for Jean�s show, I was trying to
evoke every writer�s dream (and fear). With Mark�s
release, I was going for voyeurism and a touch of
humor.
How'd I do?
Part 2 of this mini-article will appear next month.
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| Fun Facts: Bestselling Books in 2006 |
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According to Publishers Weekly on January
8, 2007, �More books found their way onto the 2006
U.S. weekly charts than ever before�495 new titles,
compared with the previous record of 452 set in
2005.� However, nearly 70% of them stayed there for
four weeks or less, while more than 20% hung around
for only one week.
With almost 200,000 titles published per year in the
U.S., it was easier to get onto the charts last
year, but harder staying there. And of course, fewer
than 1% of books published got anywhere near them.
Just in case you�re wondering, here are the top sellers:
- Hardcover fiction: The Da Vinci
Code by Dan Brown�21 weeks on the list
- Mass market fiction: Angels & Demons by
Dan Brown�36 weeks on the list
- Hardcover nonfiction: Marley & Me by
John Grogan�50 weeks on the list
- Trade books: The Kite Runner by Khaled
Hosseini�50 weeks on the list.
The authors with the most books on the charts were:
- James Patterson
- Nora Roberts
- Dan Brown.
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| Writer�s Challenge: Writing Weekend January 20th and 21st |
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Finding time to write is such a common challenge for
writers that Books in Print bulges with
titles on the topic.
That's why we've come up with our Writing Show
writing weekends, where it�s all about making the
time to actually do it. To participate, all you have
to do is spend three hours (not even consecutively!)
over the two-day period writing, planning,
researching, or brainstorming.
That�s it! You don�t have to show your work to
anyone, although if you'd like to share your
progress with us, we'd love to hear about it.
I'll be working on the aforementioned untitled
political thriller, and this time I'm going to stop
planning and start writing. I'll let you know how it
goes.
Please join me!
--Paula B.
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| Writing Show News |
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Upcoming shows:
- January 15, 2007: Police Procedure for Crime
Novelists, with Undersheriff Tony Spurlock.
- January 22, 2007: Travel Writing and Publishing,
with Harry S. Pariser.
- January 29, 2007: Of Editing, Book Design, and
Children's Books, with freelance editor and
book designer Jill Ronsley.
Coming in February:
- The fine print of self-publishing contracts,
with
attorney/author Mark Levine
- The BlueCat Screenplay Competition, with
screenwriter Gordy Hoffman
- An inside look at a self-publishing company, with
writer and entrepreneur Tim Harper.
Have a question or topic you'd like covered on
the show or in the newsletter? Want to write for us
or be a guest host? See mistakes in my writing?
Let us
know.
--Paula B.
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| Trivia Question: Bestselling Author |
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Who is the bestselling author of all time?
Answer next month.
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| The 2007 BlueCat Screenwriting Competition |
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This just in from screenwriter Gordy Hoffman at the
BlueCat Screenplay competition. Gordy will be
talking about the contest on an upcoming Writing Show.
The
BlueCat Screenwriting Competition
Grand Prize:$10,000
Finalists: $1500 each
Entry Fee: $45
Every writer who enters the BlueCat Screenplay
Competition receives written script anlaysis.
In addition, one finalist receives a live, staged
reading of their script at BlueCat's annual
SCREENPLAY LIVE at the High Falls Film Festival in
New York. The writer will receive airfare, hotel
accommodations, and a festival pass.
Loglines and contact information of all finalists
will appear on the BlueCat Web site, along with an
interview with the winner.
Top screenplays will be made available to the film
industry upon announcement.
Since 1998, the BlueCat Screenplay Competition's
mission of developing the undiscovered screenwriter
continues to reach more writers every year, with
BlueCat having the largest cash prize for a
screenplay contest offering feedback to all writers.
We are pleased to announce the BlueCat Screenplay
Competition is open for entries of feature length
scripts for our ninth year.
Semi-finalists will be announced on July 1st.
Five finalists will be named on July 15th.
The winner presented on August 1st.
Deadline: March 1, 2007
The
BlueCat Screenwriting Competition
 This
work is licensed under a Creative
Commons Attribution-NonCommercial 2.5
License.
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