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Hi, Paula,
Greetings!
Ive just discovered a wonderful writer, Elizabeth
George, author of the Inspector Lynley mysteries.
Ms. George is so impressive that I just have to share
some quotes with you.
From Payment in Blood:
Detective Constable Kevin Lonan loathed drinking
his tea from a flask. It always developed a
repulsive film that reminded him of bath scum.
And
This room was cramped and poorly lit, but it had
the combined virtues of privacy and heat, the latter
emanating from an enormous old boiler that wheezed
noisily in one corner of the room and dripped rusty
water onto the cracked tile floor.
Ms. George writes in a highly specific and visual
style, but her appeal is more than that. Shes
complex. She peppers her description with
commentary, implication, and irony. She doesnt
simply tell us that the policeman is drinking tea.
Hes drinking it in an unusual way, a way that
evokes an emotional and physical reaction in him
because of an association with a phenomenon he finds
disgusting. Nor does she just describe the room, but
also tells us about its advantages (privacy and
heat), which contrast subtly with the realities of
its faults (a leak, a damaged floor, noise).
Now thats writing!
--Paula B.
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| Q and A: How do I make myself stand out when pitching to a publisher? |
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Q: How do I make myself stand out when
pitching to a publisher?
A: Empathy! Publishers appreciate writers who
understand their issues and make life easier for
them. That means you make their mission yours, not
vice versa.
Do your homework. Carefully assess what the
publishers all about, including their scope and
product lines. Read their marketing material,
catalog, and corporate description as well as their
author guidelines. Look up some of their books. If
you feel you mesh, let them know that you are in
sync and can help them accomplish their goals.
In other words, ask not what your publisher can do
for you, but explain what you can do for them. Tell
them how you fit into their product line and how you
plan to reach the kinds of customers they seek (on
your dime, not theirs). Put yourself in their shoes.
If you were a publisher who wanted to be known for
certain types of books, what would you do to build
your business and image and make sales to your
target customers?
Of course, it goes without saying that you must keep
your promises: submit professional quality work that
fits in with the publisher's mission, meet
deadlines, and be a joy to work with.
If you focus on your publishers needs rather than
your own, you will sparkle like gold and avoid the
slush pile.
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| To Verb or Not to Verb |
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Back in library school, lo these many years ago, I
had a professor who said, If you use the word
access as a verb, dont come knockin round my
door. I imagine these days shes a pretty lonely
person. You may have noticed that the language
includes a lot more verbs than it used to, access
included. Turning nouns and adjectives into action
words has become not only acceptable, but trendy.
Or has it? Do you think its okay to architect a
system? How about to obsolete an idea? Or to
unchurch a population? (Gosh, that wasnt even a
word before it became a verb.) Is it okay to turn
any word into a verb? If not, where do you draw the
line?
I'm not comfortable erasing all the demarcations
among the parts of speech. Im okay with googling
a search term, although I have to admit the first
time I heard "Google" verbed I wanted to scream. But
I just cant see sourcing a fact (what does that
mean anyway?), lensing a video, or uniquing a
concept.
What do you think? Write me. I
really want to know, since if everything Ive
learned about grammar is wrong, Ive got a lot of
catching up to do!
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| Fun Facts |
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In June 2005, Harpers magazine reported
the number
of books published the previous year in Iceland and the
United States per 100,000 residents: 212 and 63,
respectively.
Susan Harrow at Publishing Central says Top
literary agents get about 400-1000 unsolicited
queries every month from hopeful book authors.
Publishing houses sometimes juggle 5000.
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| Writers Challenge |
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So many of us get sidetracked by our day jobs, which
absorb our time and sap our energy, even if we love
what were doing. Heres a trick for reclaiming
snippets of time for writing during your busy days:
Every time you write, make a note or
several about what youre going to do next time.
Write your ideas and tasks in bold at the top of your
document so you wont miss them. The next time you
have a few minutes to write, consult your notes
first. Youll know exactly what you want to do and
will be able to jump right in.
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| Writing Show News |
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Upcoming shows:
- December 4, 2006: Guest host Mick Halpin
interviews mystery writer Erin Hart.
- December 11, 2006: Our second writers
roundtable featuring the five fabulous guys behind
the Starting
Write Now blog.
- December 18, 2006: Our Christmas show, featuring
a special mystery guest!
Have a question or topic you'd like covered on
the show or in the newsletter? Want to write for us
or be a guest host? See mistakes in my writing?
Let us
know.
--Paula B.
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work is licensed under a Creative
Commons Attribution-NonCommercial 2.5
License.
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